Wednesday, April 12, 2006

L-rd, Cleanse me

L-rd, cleanse me
wash away my grimes and misdemeanors
purify me

Take these crumbs of sin
incinerate them
let no dog want to eat them

Cancel my desires
like dust and dirt
Gone forgotten forever

Let sin no longer rear its ugly head
nor bite me in the ass
boy that hurts

We'll celebrate the exodus
from slavery to my material wants
to freedom for my soul

Purge me
Free me
Save me

Because I can't

11 Comments:

At 4/12/2006 11:41 AM, Anonymous Chai said...

Happy Passover TRK!

 
At 4/15/2006 11:12 PM, Blogger ClooJew said...

dust and dirt
rhyme with "lust and flirt"
there's a song in there...where's dylan when you need him.

 
At 4/17/2006 6:25 AM, Blogger Eshet Chayil said...

TRK, smile. Git moed.

 
At 4/17/2006 8:56 AM, Blogger Margaritagirrl said...

OMG!!
THIS IS SUCH A PERFECT PIECE THAT YOU HAVE WRITTEN. I FEEL IT, AS IF I HAD WRITTEN IT MYSELF!

 
At 4/18/2006 11:47 AM, Anonymous malka said...

Great poem.

You can do it. Just keep trying and Hashem will help. Remember, don't try for perfection, just try for improvement. And keep moving forward.

 
At 4/20/2006 9:22 AM, Blogger Edward Ott said...

Fantastic poem truely captures the want of mankind, strive forward with compassion.

Peace

 
At 4/24/2006 12:34 PM, Blogger FrumGirl said...

You can, if you really want it.

 
At 4/25/2006 2:00 PM, Blogger The Rabbi's Kid said...

thanks ppl, much ppreciated

 
At 4/25/2006 9:06 PM, Blogger Just me said...

Why the appeal to a divine authority/being? You wanna be good, be good (or the opposite). Your appeal to a supernal being suggests a lack of willingness on your part to take the necessary steps to change, no?
ROJ

 
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